Sworn Enemies (Arkham Edition AU)

Chapter Eleven: Broken

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Moonlight did get a new look after she was shattered, I just didn't write all of the differences yet because I was so exhausted from being up so late. But with six hours of sleep and Rockstar Energy coursing through my veins, I am able to properly write her clothes now to match the one on the photo of this story. Also, a lot of this chapter is based off of my very first written work in the Valentine's Day Rewrite in Samuel's profile, but only one person had read it, so I guess it was insignificant.

Not that it isn't, because it really was insignificant, since it doesn't provide much information other than the fact Steven was mourning and he wanted to die. Hopefully, reworking it a bit will actually make the readers care instead of viewing this chapter like a filler.

Another thing I want to address is I feel like I didn't give Samuel enough credit for allowing me to use Squaridot in this story the exact same way she was in his Valentine's Day Rewrite. The only thing I've added/wrote in Squaridot's arc is the broken glass on the floor and swapping out Connie with Priyanka. So, give him a pat on the back if you see him (or send him one digitally if you haven't seen his face, he's earned it).

And one last thing, I tried my best to describe Steven's tone of voice in this chapter, but I still think it wasn't enough, so I had Samuel make another video for me to use as my intention, since I do a poor job mimicking Arkham Batman and Steven from their respective games/stories.

Arkham Steven's canonical tone in this chapter:

Also, #YouReallyAreABigOl'SoftieSteven. :)

Third Person Omniscient.

Two weeks later after the night Spinel showed up, Beach City was still recovering from the damage that her injector inflicted onto the town, most notably the ginormous crater it left when it was blown to smithereens. It's a daunting sight to bear witness to when you come across the crater, it looks as if a construction site was planned to be implemented in the vicinity and then they vanished out of thin air. The night sky with little clouds felt refreshing to see, because ever since the injector had burrowed the drill head beneath the surface, the sun and moon was blotted out by dark and thick clouds.

Most residents are still attempting to recover from their forced walking-spree by Squaridot. Surely, they've gotten great cardio, but it nearly cost them their lives if it weren't for Steven. But a more important thing to discuss is Moonlight.

She has a lot of baggage from the aforementioned night. For starters, her entire form changed from when she reformed. Her black pants were replaced with gray pants, and white streaks at the side of her thighs.

Nobody could tell if those were rips that revealed her pale skin or intentional white to look like a lightning blast. From her waist, there was nothing but her holographic skin. But there was nothing in that area, no belly-button. She looks like she has an hourglass figure.

On her chest area, it looks like she wears protective gear on it, with some black and white lines at the top of her cloth-chestplate. She also wore white shoulderpads that looked similar to Spinel's shoulderpads, perhaps that was intentional. Moving down to her arms, there was nothing but black gloves at the end of each hand and some metal cuff on each wrist, which looked like shackles but without chains.