Just a few ideas that didn't make it into the fanfiction:
1) Goldilocks was originally going to be either little red riding hoods big sister or baby sister/carer
2) Goldilocks was going to have the power to turn into a bear at will
3) Goldilocks was going to be a princess, or come from am extremely wealthy family in the Enchanted Forest
4) Goldilocks was going to meet Wendy in Neverland
5) Goldilocks was going to have a full chapter with Tinkerbell in Neverland
6) Goldilocks was originally going to swim (as a mermaid) to arendelle, befriend the queen and princess, and become a victim of the '30 years freeze'
7) Goldilocks's mother was going to do be alive, but very ill, and either would have been killed by Cora in the Enchanted Forest, or would have gone to Storybrooke with the first curse, but not remembering a thing about Goldilocks, and would have died a few chapters after goldilocks found her in Storybrooke
8) Goldilocks was going to first meet Captain Hook in either Neverland or on his ship in Storybrooke
9) Goldilocks and Merida were just going to be friends who met because of their past with bears
10) Goldilocks was going to be a villain, and finish Peter Pan's unfinished work in Storybrooke....
11) The original end of the fanfiction was going to be after Goldilocks found out Peter was dead, (then all the Merida/Cruella and Rodger parts were added)
12) At the end of the fanfiction (with all the Peter Pan business) Goldilocks was meant to die. She was going to be shot by Dreamshade in Neverland by one of the lost boys (accidentally) and Peter would have saved her with the Neverland water. As long as she thought Peter was alive, and she thought Storybrooke would become the new Neverland she would stay alive, but Henry was going to tell her what happened to Peter, and because she knew Storybrooke wasn't going to become Neverland she would have died a few minutes after
13) The final chapter would have been Goldilocks and Peter Pan in "heaven" (after her death)
14) After scrapping Goldilocks's death the last chapter would have been her and Henry, and their first kiss.
15) Rodger was going to be Elsa and Anna's father, when he went to arendelle. However, I realised (with Anita being pregnant when Rodger left) it would have been impossible, due to everyone's ages
16) There was a lot of debating surrounding if Rodger would die or not. Obviously I was going to make Goldilocks stay with Dr Hopper, but my little sister pointed out to me that Peter Pan and Anita had both died, and they both meant the world to Goldilocks, and she will probably never see Merida again. I did consider keeping Rodger alive, and he would have fallen through a portal to Arendelle instead, but I decided to kill him off instead...
17) Cruella and Rodger were going to have a scene in Storybrooke together, but Cruella is supposed to be in jail, plus I think it would have just been boring and pointless
18) Peter Pan was going to return at the end: he was actually going to be disguised as Will Scarlet! Will appears on the first half of season 4, not that long after Peter died, and Peter and Will's actors are both English! But I wasn't too sure how he would react to Goldilocks and Henry, or if he would still be evil or not. (This idea was thought of by @Jadoue1999 , she's a massive fan of Peter Pan. Go follow her, and check out her fanfictions!) Plus this idea may not have worked due to season 5b (in the Underworld)
19) Merida almost didn't make the final publishing of the fanfiction. I was constantly deleting her from the fanfiction, and then adding her again, and rewriting... Finally she stayed!!
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Once Upon A Time: Goldilocks comes to Storybrooke
FanfictionA young 15 year old girl finds herself in Storybrooke, a modern town, where all the fairy tale characters live. The young girl claims to be Goldilocks, however no one admits to knowing her, and the one person who does won't tell the full story. Most...