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Jackson Weasley | Harry Potter | [ D ]

Oc made by: xXxArethesaxXx

Fandom: Harry Potter Series

Name: Jackson Weasley (added a family member to The Weasley's)

This is questionable. It depends on how he affects the Weasley's and canon characters. Also, his name doesn't really fit well. You don't have to change it, but there's something that feels off about the name Jackson for a Harry Potter character, but then again, Fred, George, and Ronald are pretty average names.

Age: 15

Blood-Status: pure-blood

Year/House: Gryffindor, 5th Year

Zodiac: Cancer

DOB: July 21, 1975

Personality: highly imaginative, loyal, insecure, moody and forgetful

Maybe explain a bit more? Form what I can see here, his personality contradicts the other Weasley children well.

Likes: Art, home-based activities, helping loved ones, a good meal with friends

Dislikes: Strangers, any criticism of Mum, revealing of personal life, fear of lighting and thunder

Crush: Miranda Grovel (OC)

Status: Single in the books 1-6 then married (at age 25)

Looks: feminine face, long nose, medium brown eyes, freckles.

Description: Brown knitted sweater with a v-neck (beige outline), grey trousers, black shoes, Gryffindor Uniform (if you get what I mean). Short messy red hair and bangs over his eyes.

Height: 5'8

Wand: Ash, Dragon heartstring (Swedish Short-snout), fairly heavy, good for: inventing new spells, 12 inches, tan with unicorn horn-like handle

Throughout all my knowledge of the Harry Potter universe, I know little to nothing about wands. I'm not sure if this is a special wand or an average wand, or even an in between wand, but a unicorn hand sounds weird.

Family/Relatives: The Weasley Family and any other known pure-blood families (Does that make sense?)

Yeah, it makes sense.

Back Story: Born in England, lived in The Weasley House for his teenage life before falling in love Miranda Grovel (another OC) then moving out of the house to live with his girlfriend. They got married, with Jackson being 25 and Miranda being 26. He got a job as an Author who wrote his well known books called 'A Time Turner Event' and 'Unwanted: Part 1 and 2'. He and his wife now have three children: Jennifer Weasley, Leonardo ''Leo'' Weasley and Yolanda Weasley.

He's a good character, it's just that he's really boring. He seems more like a side character and not a good main character. I wouldn't want to read about him chasing after this girl, finally getting her, and then writing books and having children. "Jennifer" is a pretty bad name for a wizard considering her parents are both wizards who, presumably live in the Wizarding World.

Like I said above, this character is pretty okay, except for his dullness. He's just boring and not main character material (not sure if you plan on writing a fanfic or just for role playing). The books he's written seem more interesting than him. I wish there was more detail about his personality as well. Other than how boring he is, he's a pretty good oc.

Sue Rating: 3%

Originality Rating: 97%

Interest Grade: D