OC Reviews [now closed bc of personal issues]

Fluff the Ferret | FNAF | [ B+ ]

Oc made by: milomydoggie

Fandom: FNAF

Name: fluff the ferret

Age: 20?????

Gender: male

Species: weasel (even though they call him a ferret)

Interesting. Why?

Description: umm could you check in my art book if you don't mind me asking?

I love his vest.

Personality: he's somewhat cocky, a jokester, and can be sheepish

Cocky and a jokester go together, but him also being sheepish doesn't.

Likes: jokes, the thought of making people laugh, new friends, and his praying mantis he has in the giggle corner (I made the giggle corner up😅)

I'm confused, is his praying mantis like a pet to him? Because below with his love interest/crush it throws me off.

Dislikes: being alone, people not smiling, friends leaving him, clingy people

Friends leaving him and clingy people don't really fit well. It's like he doesn't like when his friends are gone but he also doesn't like when people are too close.

Strengths: speed, timing

Does this go with the whole animatronics attacking people thing? Because you also said he doesn't leave the giggle corner.

Weaknesses: stealth, has monophobia

Is the giggle corner where he attacks the guard?? Because he's portrayed a lot as innocent and just playing with his pet, but now it comes off that he's one of the attacking animatronics.

Backstory: he was created to be a comedian to entertain the children in the pizzeria but was unused for years until foxy went out of order and finally placed him in, his original spot was to introduce the fnaf crew or pass time until they come and perform but he was soon moved to a different area called the giggle corner where he continued his joke telling. After a couple more years his voice box started to glitch causing him to scare some kids and getting complaints from the parents. Not too long later he was discontinued from his spot and stays in the giggle corner (unless it's when mike comes) playing with his pet pray mantis which is the only thing from keeping him from being alone.

I like this backstory, and it does fill me in on my gray area above. Also he's not a Mary Sue so far and that's nice.

Powers: none

Crush/love interest: he always states if his praying mantis was an animatronic he would go out with her.

I'm low key concerned.

Overall, this is good for a FNAF oc—really good! He doesn't interact with any main characters, and doesn't have any extreme powers. Also he is dressed appropriately and acts appropriately for an animatronic in FNAF. I really like this character.

Sue rating: 15%

Originality rating: 80%

Interest grade: B+