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Aquita | Original Fandom | [ A ]

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Fandom Description: Ernalda, the Isle of Fertility. A place full of heathen traditions, magic, peace...and war cries ready to be shouted.

Ever since the Iterian Scandal six years ago, the realm has been on the brink of civil war between the Juræ and the Devæ. The life of the ailing Iren Croth alone stands between unstable peace and armed conflict.

One day though, the king is murdered by his grandson Meteus, a man notorious for his lechery, ability to be the weather and scandal.  Croth's murder signals Devel, ruler of Hell to take Ernalda for himself by force, thus beginning Teretu, the Third Conflict between the Juræ and the Devæ.

Aquita, Meteus' aunt and victim, the carrier of his unborn child and Croth's youngest daughter, gets upset when she hears that Terr, her elder sister plans to usurp and/or execute their sister and Meteus' mother, the incapacitated Irenta Æra. Along with a few of her servants, she tries to confront Terr, but dies before she gets the chance.

Reunited with her father, Aquita tries to find a way to return to Lythe in order to help her living family fight Devel and Meteus. But when Æra has an idea to dispose of Meteus, is Aquita needed?

Name- Aquita (there is no surname)

You've picked some nicely unique names for this.

Age: 16 in the prologue, 17 in the rest of the book

Gender: Female

Species: Jura Natur (a.k.a  nature spirit)

Description: Around 5'6",  round face, chestnut curls that go down to her breasts, brown eyes, and she's nine months pregnant.

Skin color?? Also what does she usually wear??

Personality: Selfless, loyal to the point of self-sacrifice, compassionate, charming, enjoys privacy, down-to-earth, nurturing and persistent.

I like her personality because I could easily string all these things together and get and image of her.

Likes: Her native earldom of Sarenta, the water, the company of her servants (we must not forget that she is royalty,) and children.

Dislikes: Rumours and acts of treason, wild boar, sex, being called a traitor by association, overly flirtatious men, her sister Pyra's nymphomania and occassional insanity and the fact that Terr acts like an entitled peacock.

CAN WE ALL BEGIN USING "ENTITLED PEACOCK" AS OUR NEW INSULT

Strengths: Believe it or not, she's got willpower and she's not that gullible. (Sorry, that was just a subject that was swept under the rug!)

Nice additions

Weaknesses: Aquita is very self-sacrificial; she will do anything to save her family, even if it leads to her own demise. Which, spoiler alert, it does.

SPOILERS OML I HATE THOSE

Powers/ Abilities: Let's see. She's the Water Element, and has fledgeling abilities to use water to heal people. Also, she can turn into actual water and breathe under it.

Crush/love interest: She's had several suitors for the past two years, but she's sort of asexual. She's had a crush on a servant on hers; and in the book, her half-brother tries to woo her, but the love she feels for him is fraternal.

I LIKE HOW SHE's SORT OF ASEXUAL. also stop her half-brother. He needs to be STOPPPPPPED.

Overall, I like her! She isn't what you expect to be a warrior, but in her own way without a doubt she is. You should add those few things to the description, and totally END her half-brother, but overall I would enjoy a series with her in it to the point of her being my favorite character.

Sue rating: 10%
Originality: 95%
Interest grade: A
Statement: (I'm so sorry just the water powers reminded me of this) Moist ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
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