OC Reviews [now closed bc of personal issues]

Christina Evans | Teen Wolf/None | [ B+ ]

Fandom: Teen wolf

Age: 17

Gender: female

Sexual orientation: straight

Species: human-witch

Hair color: black

Eye color: bright blue

Body type: curvy

Hair type: curly

Maybe just say "hair:" then describe that part. Also what's her race?

Personality: sassy, funny, careless, over romantic (makes many romantic jokes and flirts a lot) and rebellious

Okay so I really haven't seen many OC's that lean towards romantic personalities so it's nice to see them!! However her personality does match up pretty well with all of those white-female-leaders-to-rebellions-in-distopias overview (Katniss and Tris)

Likes: supernatural creatures, adventures, converse

I want to say converse are too common but I'm part of the problem.

Dislikes: school, homework, golf

See I like school but school out of school (homework) is a fricking sin.

Strengths: funny (which helps get a small group of friends) rebellious which interests Some people.

Characters that aren't too shy to interact with people: 👌👀👌👀👌👀👌👀👌👀 good shit go౦ԁ sHit👌 thats ✔ some good👌👌shit right👌👌th 👌 ere👌👌👌 right✔there ✔✔if i do ƽaү so my selｆ 💯 i say so 💯 thats what im talking about right there right there (chorus: ʳᶦᵍʰᵗ ᵗʰᵉʳᵉ) mMMMMᎷМ💯 👌👌 👌НO0ОଠＯOOＯOОଠଠOoooᵒᵒᵒᵒᵒᵒᵒᵒᵒ👌 👌👌 👌 💯 👌 👀 👀 👀 👌👌Good shit

Also is she rebellions in one of those "I'm not like other girls" ways?? Cause if so, turn the car around and fuCKING SLAM THE GAS PEDAL.

Weaknesses: careless she tends to not pay attention to important things, rebellious which usually gets her in lots of trouble, also lapis burns her

Okay the lapis part seems irrelevant unless it's part of the series and I have no clue what I'm saying.

Backstory: Christina was born in Oregon, Bend, her dad Ben being a CEO of a corporation in Portland Oregon and human. Her mom Jessica being a piano teacher and a witch. When Christina turned 17 her dad decided to move to California to find more options of living. Her mom stopped doing piano lessons and became an accountant. Christina dreaded leaving her friends but her parents thought it was best seeing as they were bad influences.

Kind of a girl-has-to-start-privileged-life-somewhere-else-during-high-school theme

Powers: she's a little experienced in black magic, and fire and ice. Also when she cries her tears are boiling gold which always end up burning her cheeks.

The witchcraft I envision is the sapphic moodboards and aesthetics on tumblr, but the gold part seems so cute (like for witchcraft aesthetics) and I'm just a lost confused bean looking for help.

Crush: Stiles (they don't get together till the end of the year)

They should break a bed with their love.
;)

A little extra: she wears a necklace and in the pendant is silver and gold shavings which help control her powers, and she only can use her powers if she doesn't have her necklace.

I mean if you wanted to really make this story comedic, have her be kind of clumsy and forgetful (not in a schoolgirl kind of way, but much more natural) and so she wants to perform some magic and suddenly she's like "shit, I forgot the necklace" or maybe make it so she doesn't like how it feels around her neck and have that tie in with the forgetfulness part. ;)))))))))

Clothing: black tank top, grey sweatshirt, black and white converse (the shoes I didn't spell it right), and blueish grey skinny jeans.

DONT WORRY HUN YOU SPELLED IT RIGHT!

Height: 5'8

Relationship with parents: loves them

BLESS THIS. OFTEN PEOPLE THINK IT'S COOL TO HAVE THEIR OC'S HAVE CRUDDY RELATIONSHIPS WITH THEIR PARENTS.
PLEASE SPREAD THE IDEA OF HEALTHY FAMILIES.

Overall, try to include/edit a couple of things:
• her race!!!
• make sure you don't force her down a Tris Prior or Katniss path, cause those are OVERUSED
• DID YOU SEE THAT FORGETFUL PART WITH THE NECKLACE CAUSE OML THAT WOULD MAKE HER RELATABLE
• HER BACKSTORY!! JUST CHECK MY COMMENT AND MAKE SURE YOU DON'T FOLLOW THAT PATH WHERE SHE HAS LOTS OF THINGS BUT STILL ACTS LIKE ITS ALL RUINED BY MOVING
Parts I liked:
• ROMANTIC OC BLESS BLESS
• WASNT TOO SHY TO INTERACT WITH OTHERS
• I'm a slut for witchcraft
• ^^ that was worded terribly
• thanks for disagreeing Gwen
• am I seriously arguing with myself
• maybe you are
• THE PARENT PART

Sue rating: 35%
Originality rating: 70%
Interest grade: B+
Statement: "do you wish to converse about converse?"
Admin: Gwen