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Aria Crane | Undertale | [ A- ]

Name: Aria Crane

Mother: Rose Crane but now calls Toriel her mom

A bit overused, but it's fine in this case.

Father: Rob Crane but now doesn't consider anyone here father

Age: 11

Gender: Female

Backstory: Father had been diagnosed with strange emotion disorder from birth, causing him to have violent outbursts toward everyone near him. Mother eventually divorced him. There was no custody battle, as she wanted to stay and care for her father. Eventually she couldn't handle the stress anymore and she ran away from home. Days later she ended up on Mt. Ebott and fell into the underground to be rescued by Toriel and unlike most people, Aria stayed with Toriel. She listened to Toriel and didn't object to staying forever. She started having all kinds of adventures in the catacombs, soon she met Sans and Papyrus in Snowdin on a particularly adventurous day, they began getting into all sorts of trouble together but she always came home to Toriel.

I actually find this kind of interesting! I don't see many original characters who do this (I may be wrong, though) and think it's cute that she stays with Toriel! Though interactions with Sans and Papyrus are very common, it makes sense since she's staying with Toriel and they live close by.

Friends: Sans, Papyrus, and her pale orange-ish cat, Sahara that Toriel gave her for their first Christmas together.

Where did she get the cat?

Sexuality: She's too young to know for sure, but she doesn't want to raise family and would rather just have her cat

Appearance: Keeps her black hair down and some what messy, but will style it for special occasions. Likes to wear a blue tank top with lilac purple shorts, usually wears a necklace with a tear drop shaped ruby but some days she won't bother putting it on.

Not too over the top yet she still seems like she'd have a memorable appearance.

Personality: book worm and cat person. Enjoys lazing about reading and playing with her kitty. She also likes to paint from time to time but is really bad at it if she doesn't have something to copy if she copies something it has a chance of being decent.  Likes to walk around the catacombs and the town of Snowdin for her only exercise, as she's not very athletic, although times Sans can talk her into a game of soccer or basketball.

Makes sense with the rest of her character, and also explains why she leaves the Ruins.

Flaws: not very strong, kind of awkward, forgetful

Strengths: good swimmer, can run fast, good at writing

Good, yet where would she swim?

Soul color: yellow, justice

Isn't there already a child with a yellow soul color?

Your oc is actually very cute sounding! I love how she decides to stay with Toriel, though maybe more detail about their relationship could be added? There isn't really many problems, as I said her connects with Sans and Papyrus are understandable, though I'm just confused where she got the cat. So overall, a pretty decent character!

Sue Rating: 5%

Originality Rating: 95%

Interest Grade: A-