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Willow Malanony | Original Fandom(?) | [ C- ]

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Fandom:  (no fandom) After suicide by shooting herself due to the abuse of her father whom was left by her mother due to said abuse. After she dies is appointed the next reaper after the previous reaper 'Grim' was kicked. The Death committee of 7 disagrees when choosing her by the fates made the final decision.

Sounds interesting, but why would they choose her? Her death wasn't extra ordinary and she was (I assume) just some random human.

Name: Willow Malanony

Age: 19

Wouldn't she be able to move away from her father at this age?

Gender: Female

Species: Human - Later becomes Reaper

Description: Human: Heart shaped face, black semi-curled hair chest length, straight nose, blue eyes.

Reaper: All same except: Red eyes and very pale skin

Seems to make sense.

Personality: Though naturally timid and shy, avoiding people for the reason that lies on the fact she has trust issues stemming from her mothers abandonment when she was 4.  She is short tempered which clouds her better judgement from time to time. She is generally sensitive and many things can set her off. But with much time and dedidcation to the goal, Willow can make due.

Nicely described, yet some of her traits somewhat go against each other.

Likes: Playing guitar from time to time. Reading

Dislikes: Crowds, parties, Loud noises, tomatoes.

You should probably add more to her likes and dislikes, as well as connect it to her backstory as well as her new life as a Reaper. Also doesn't she dislike her parents?

Strengths: Loyal, Quiet, Motherly, kind, timid, observant

Weaknesses: Sensitive, Easily distracted, short tempered, emotionally broken, trust issues, sometimes a total pushover

These are more like personality traits rather than strengths and weaknesses.

Backstory: Willow was abused by her father a lot, who was left by her mother for the fact she was an alcoholic, little is known about her mother. Knowing the pain she faced, willow always showed immense kindness to those around her, knowing they two were fighting their own battles. She was known as a mother to everyone. Everyday is a challenge for willow to overcome her father and reality as a whole.

Good, yet once again the traits don't exactly fit together. I like how, despite how badly her father treated her, she still stayed kind and tried her best to do good and how she knows "they too were fighting their own battles".

Powers/Abilities: (well she is the reaper, so I don't know how to put it.) Death

Crush/Love interest: Undertermined until later in book

Scenarios:

A) Immensely confused, pretend it's a dream.

B) Will desperately try to wiggle out, use brute for if truely necissary

C) Make suddle hints and spend more time with said crush

D) Reason with group, if that fails, will make a run for it

E) Fall too knees and cry

F) Blows off demanding their innocence to be proven

G) Wait a while then talk it out awkwardly

H) Beg at their knees to forget what happened

I) Well Willow was forced and had nowhere else to go, she was hesitant but gradually comes to accept fate as it is

Willow was kind of a generic character, but she had some traits that shinned through the typical ones, such as her view on other people's lives. Unfortunately, there was more disagreeable designs for her character. Her personality, strengths, and weakness make sense and are pretty good concepts, but her character had a boring aura.

Sue Rating: 55%
Originality Rating: 60%
Interest Grade: C-

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