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Fandom: Dragaea. Dragaea is a high fantasy novel series I am writing. It can serve as a warning against tampering with genes and such. Just a good old fashioned adventure

Full name: Sparka Pureheart

Nicknames: Spars, Sparky, Cookie Monster.

I swear if this dragon doesn't like cookies I'll cry.

Age: 17 going on 18

Gender: female

Looks: a red fire dragon with a feathery golden mane. Her wings have golden membranes, and she has golden class and two curved golden horns. There are golden crescent marks around her Amber eyes. She as scars on her left flank from being beaten. She has golden sock marks as well. Often wears earrings in her ears, a leather saddle, a Celt-braid necklace, bracers, and sometimes armor.

Okay I may just be a sucker for dragons but this is super pretty.
Also am I the only one who reads Celtic and Celt as "selt" and "seltic" cause I'm always told I'm wrong and it's confusing someone please help.

Personality: Sparka is a piece of live sandpaper. She tends to grate on a lot of people, but in the end, she ends up doing more good than harm. She is sarcastic and a tough lover, but she is at the same time Derpy and fun-loving. She is quick to point out faults, but also quick to give advice and forgive.

She founds like a giant flying dog oml give me 7

Likes: COOKIES, her bond Silver, flying, being free, and a fight in her favor.

COOKIE CONNECTION.

Hates: raisins, Flash and Bluebolt, ambushes, and Silver being stupid.

I always recommend just giving slight details when you're going to list names. Like for example "Mary (goth classmate)"
Also nobody likes raisins. Those frickers are nasty.

Strengths: she is smart and often sees outside the immediate situation. She can also hold her own in a brawl. She is a fire dragon, after all.

Fire-breathing, flying dog

Weaknesses: water, which sucks because her sister is a water dragon. She can often let rage blind her and be too devout on killing the enemy.

Backstory: Sparka was raised in a broken home. At age 11, she fled with her friend Ares and sister Marina. After a hard trip, she made it to Dragaea. A few years later, she was sent to find Silver. Over time, she has been shedding her callouses and opening back up to the world.

Nice story.

Crush: no crush; she's asexual.

ASEXUAL, FIRE-BREATHING, FLYING DOG.

Overall, I really really like asexual, fire-breathing, flying dogs. Pure animal OC's are actually rare but I love seeing them. She was very dog like (I've only made the connection four times) and I really like dogs. Also who doesn't love dragons? If you don't love dragons I'll personally fight you. Like seriously come out in the comments and I'll fight you. no one hates dragons on my watch. At least get off my watch before you hate dragons.

Sue rating: 15%
Originality rating: 85%
Interest grade: A
Statement: tag yourself I'm Mary the goth classmate
Admin: Gwen