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Caleb | Original Fandom | [ C ]

Character made by: @Haunted_Shadows_

Name: Caleb James Deora

Interesting name choice. James tends to be a common middle name, but if you want to make your character stand out less than that of a Mary Sue, it totally works.

Nicknames:

- Cal

- Birdie

Birdie is a cute nickname. And Cal just makes sense.

Age: 20

Gender: Male

Sexuality: Bisexual [ leans towards females ]

It's cool that you added where on the spectrum he lies.

Appearance:

Toned muscles rippling through his toned skin, his lean body compliments his flirtatious acts. Full, dark red lips resemble that of almost a rose, a pink undertone showing through. Caleb's medium length brunette hair is littered with lighter highlights of caramel and amber, a few darkened pieces of blonde hiding. Deep blue eyes that can almost seem brown at times and protected by his dark eyelashes and the occasional hair in his face. Caleb's defined jawline is a compiled by his high cheekbones. In all, he is a reasonably handsome man.

[ http://malecelebbio.com/gallery/2013/02/Arran-Sly-01.jpg ]

Very detailed description. "Lean body" is slightly confusing as lean usually means less muscular then he is described. Brown and blue eyes are almost completely different when it comes to the hues of irises, so I'm not sure how they'd ever be mistaken on him?? The rest of his description is fairly good and ties in with him being "reasonably handsome".

Scars: 2 scars, one from fighting and the other from his father - Long scar tracing the length of his bicep [ right arm ]- A small [ 1/2 inch ] faded scar on the left side of his neck nearing the back

Scars: 2 scars, one from fighting and the other from his father

- Long scar tracing the length of his bicep [ right arm ]

- A small [ 1/2 inch ] faded scar on the left side of his neck nearing the back

Scars could definitely be included in his appearance rather than a different section for it.

Personality:

Caleb isn't exactly who he seems, but one wouldn't know that simply by glancing at him. You would have to stare at him to get that information for yourself, for it is buried deep inside of him and he rarely shows who he is unless you are on his bad side. Appearing as someone kind, he gives off the allusion that he is someone nice. A sarcastic ass, this jokester doesn't even try to understand what you are going through nor how you feel at the moment. Although he seems caring and will help you, don't expect this to be something too regular or else he gets annoyed with you and writes one off as someone needy. Caleb is someone confusing, but that way he talks shows you just how flirty he really is. Cold and manipulative, he likes winning and is a ruthless competitor. He isn't much, but Caleb will confuse you, make you love him and hate him at the same time, and break your heart all in one go. Seemingly nice, have fun when he figures you out. His bad side is worse when he is angry, but you'll just have to figure out how bad if he hates you.

Pretty intriguing. His personality is kind of confusing as it jumps from his two sides, but I guess that's what you were going for. He kind of has the vibe of a guy from a movie who turns out to be the villain in the end. He also sounds like a sociopath, and if I'm not wrong, is a sociopath? I understand how he acts flirty and sarcastic but his bad side overpowers and kind of makes me feel like he's a dick.