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Axinite | Steven Universe | [ A+ ]

Fandom: Steven Universe

Name: Axinite

Age: 3,000

3. Illuminati confirmed.

Gender: Technically genderless,but uses she/her.

Species: Full Gem

Description: Wears coal colored  shorts,a muddy long sleeve with nightshade colored gloves,a black tinted visor,very dark brown skin,and a short adobe pixie cut.6'2,and is fairly stocky.

Not that this applies to this character just I heard once that being taller is actually dangerous for humans and that's why it's a recessive trait.

Personality: Axinite is always up for a laugh.Has a very dirty and morbid sense of humour,and will find the hilarity in the darkest of situations.Always attempting to make others smile and help as much as she can,whether that be through helping those in dire need or cracking jokes when times are tough.If you try to hurt those she cares for or just go out of your way to intentionally annoy her,however,she won't hesitate to beat the living crap out of you.

That last part reminded me of the phrase "rough n' tough". I like jokesters as well. Very nice!

Likes: The desert,Beryl,assisting others,and warm environments.

Psst not all deserts are warm environments. To be a desert, and land just needs to receive very little rainfall. Technically the Arctic is a desert.

Dislikes: Debbie Downers,bugs,food,and senseless violence.

Nobody likes Debbie downers.

Strengths: Can thrive in hot deserts,is able to cauterize and soothe wounds,and is extremely in tune with emotions.

The extremely in tune with emotions part is kind of sueish. Out of all of the gems we've met, none of them have been in tune with their emotions, so it isn't a good idea to have yours be a first or anything.

Weaknesses: Has little control over her own emotions,

In tune with one's emotions is close to being in control of your emotions!!

feels all too guilty,and can't handle pressure well.

Is that a geology joke? Cause if it was, I got it.

Backstory: Axinite was one of many to be created by Homeworld to treat injured Gem soldiers by mending them entirely,even if they were corrupt. (Axinite gemstones are believed to heal both mentally and physically.) She did this for many years until she witnessed the Quartz soldier she had just cured slaughter a young child before her eyes. At that moment Axinite realized she had inadvertently allowed hundreds,maybe even thousands, to be murdered,and in shock and remorse,she proceeded to bubble every other Axinite in existence,thusly ending the Axinite program. (Homeworld didn't make Axinites' ever again,as it drained their already depleting resources and it was much more economic  to pump out cheap Quartz soldiers and use them even if they were a bit defective.) Afterwards,Axinite didn't use her powers ever again unless one hundred percent necessary,and decided she'd instead help others by making them laugh instead.When she ran off to an obscure forest and remained on Earth,and there she met a malformed defect named Beryl.

I was about to call Axinite out for being one of those "last of their species" characters, but your background makes sense and doesn't interfere with the Crystal Gems which is 👌👀👌👀👌👀👌👀👌👀 good shit go౦ԁ sHit👌 thats ✔ some good👌👌shit right👌👌th 👌 ere👌👌👌 right✔there ✔✔if i do ƽaү so my selｆ 💯 i say so 💯 thats what im talking about right there right there (chorus: ʳᶦᵍʰᵗ ᵗʰᵉʳᵉ) mMMMMᎷМ💯 👌👌 👌НO0ОଠＯOOＯOОଠଠOoooᵒᵒᵒᵒᵒᵒᵒᵒᵒ👌 👌👌 👌 💯 👌 👀 👀 👀 👌👌Good shit

Axinite fell in love with her sweet and carefree personality,and to this day they remain in the forest,helping anyone who is lost there or in need of directions.They've no idea who the hell the Crystal Gems are.

GAY SPACE ROCKS. IM ALWAYS UP FOR GAY SPACE ROCKS.
Also not having contact with the canon characters makes Axinite AMAZING!!
Just for others to understand why it's not good to associate with canon characters: you're losing a lot of creativity by just giving in to the canon plot. It's a whole, fictional universe for your character to be a part of, so why associate with the drama of the main characters WHEN YOU CAN MAKE UP YOUR OWN?? It always ends up more interesting that way and a lot less sueish!!

Powers: Healing,psammokinesis (the power to control sand.She often used heated sand to cauterize cracked Gems.) and very altruistic.

YOU STUCK TO A NURSE ROLE. BLESS.

Love Interest: Is in love with Beryl,and they are in a relationship.

Cute. GAY SPACE ROCKS!! SO CUTE! OML!! THIS IS REALLY CUTE AND IT WOULD BE GREAT AS A SMALL SPINOFF SERIES TO SU THAT THEY COULD MAKE FILLER EPISODES FOR!!

Overall, *deep breath* BOI HOW THE HELL DID YOU MAKE A SU OC THIS GOOD. SO GOOD. ITS GOT THAT GAY PART EVERY SU PIECE NEEDS. OVERALL, I LOVE IT.
However, maybe touch up with the "in tune with" and "not in control with". I may not be correct with my terms, but I'm fairly sure they can mean the same thing!
BUT SERIOUSLY THIS OC WAS 👌👀👌👀👌👀👌👀👌👀 good shit go౦ԁ sHit👌 thats ✔ some good👌👌shit right👌👌th 👌 ere👌👌👌 right✔there ✔✔if i do ƽaү so my selｆ 💯 i say so 💯 thats what im talking about right there right there (chorus: ʳᶦᵍʰᵗ ᵗʰᵉʳᵉ) mMMMMᎷМ💯 👌👌 👌НO0ОଠＯOOＯOОଠଠOoooᵒᵒᵒᵒᵒᵒᵒᵒᵒ👌 👌👌 👌 💯 👌 👀 👀 👀 👌👌Good shit

Sue rating: 5%
Originality rating: 95%
Interest grade: A+
Statement: 👌👀👌👀👌👀👌👀👌👀 good shit go౦ԁ sHit👌 thats ✔ some good👌👌shit right👌👌th 👌 ere👌👌👌 right✔there ✔✔if i do ƽaү so my selｆ 💯 i say so 💯 thats what im talking about right there right there (chorus: ʳᶦᵍʰᵗ ᵗʰᵉʳᵉ) mMMMMᎷМ💯 👌👌 👌НO0ОଠＯOOＯOОଠଠOoooᵒᵒᵒᵒᵒᵒᵒᵒᵒ👌 👌👌 👌 💯 👌 👀 👀 👀 👌👌Good shit
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