OC Reviews [now closed bc of personal issues]

Alannah Williams | Harry Potter | [ D- ]

Fandom:Harry Potter

Name: Alannah Williams

Age: 11

Gender: girl

Species: witch

Description:Blond hair blue eyes. Metamorphosis which means that she can change her appearance at will. Short.

Interesting, but I feel like this is commonly used for some Harry Potter ocs.

Personality:very happy,curious, and an optimist

Vague.

Sexuality: Straight

Likes: Family, friends, potions, drawing, reading, and animals

Dislikes:fire, bugs, spiders, and when people tease her for being short

Strengths:optimistic, good with animals,and drawing

Weaknesses: Transfiguration and is really self-conscious but hides it really well, stubborn. Not that strong.

The hiding her self-consciousness is relatable and would probably make her more likable as a character.

Backstory: Moved from California to Europe with her parents and her nine year old sisters (twins) l. Gets accepted into Hogwarts is able to go because her grandparents are Irish.

Not very interesting, but not overdramatized and tragic.

Crush: for now none

There wasn't much to go on for this oc. Elaboration is really needed. The character wasn't very interesting either and I found I didn't want to read much further. She was, however, fairly original with only one Sueish type trait.

Sue Rating: 15%
Originality Rating: 85%
Interest Grade: D-

Admin: Billy