My Thoughts

The Forest

alright guys so this one might be a little different, but i had an idea and i went with it. tell me what you think!
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       As you take a walk through the park, you notice a patch of flowers not far off the path your feet is scraping against. you had never noticed them before, so you walk toward them. You pick one, observing the light purple flower. As you stare at it, another emerges from the ground. And then another. and another. and another.
       They begin popping up in groups, in a path only you can see. You follow the path as the flowers getting bigger and bigger. The small, harmless flowers turn into shrubs, plants and suddenly they're trees. The trees are beautiful colors: green, red, purple, yellow, blue, and any other shade you could ever imagine. They get bigger and bigger as you walk through. You begin to not see your way through the thickness of this jungle.
     You close your eyes, rubbing them to see if you're dreaming. When you open them, a creature is standing in front of you. It's not very different from a human, but it's enough of a difference that it knocks you off balance and you stumble backwards. It's golden eyes stare at you as you walk.... through it. It was as if it was a ghost, translucent and transparent. All you could see was it's eyes. A deer runs across your path, grabbing your attention.
     The trees tower over you, almost 4 times your height. You see animals swinging from tree to tree, but you can't tell what animal it is. You jump as a piercing scream scurries across the jungle and passes you. The sharp noise is heard throughout the trees. It fills every nook and cranny of the forest, making it impossible to identify where it came from.
      You continue along the path until you see moss hanging from a tree in the distance. It glows, as if calling out to you to walk through. You intriguingly walk toward it, as if in a trance by the tangled vines. When you reach it, you hold your hand out to touch it. You grab a vine and pull it sideways, making an opening for you to walk through.
    You reach the other side and turn around, but there is nothing there. It's as if it never happened.