Title: The Battle Within an Angel
Author: NBNiar
Reviewer: IzzBizz747
QUICK NOTE FROM SUNSHINE:
This review was actually completed and sent to me two weeks ago. I just accidentally skipped over it, and I am so sorry for the delay! It wasn't the reviewer at all - that was entirely my fault. Thank you for your patience!
Summary: 5/5
The summary was incredible. I loved the collection of short sentences, but the fact that some of them were slightly longer helped hook me in. Usually, I'd say that too short sentences at once got a bit cheesy and didn't sound quite as good, but you wrote it really well. The summary was engaging and told what the story was about, leaving mystery to make the reader want more.
Grammar: 5/5
I could not see any grammatical errors, and if there were they were not at all noticeable. The story was very carefully written, well done!
Character Building: 4/5
The characters were very well built. I'd say that there were a few slip ups.
Writing Style: 4/5
Your writing style was generally quite good. It had a good flow, and a rhythm you kept up for most of the book.
Plot + Uniqueness: 5/5
The plot wasn't like anything I had read before. Unique, special, and very well thought out.
OVERALL SCORE: 23/25
So far, this book is great. Spellings and punctuation are perfect and your wording is fantastic. The plot, I think, is the best, as I've never read anything like it before.
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