Story by @roguemax
REVIEW:
This may be fanfiction, but this ain't cringy at all. You may believe that the storyline takes a turn into sticky sweet romance which suffocates your heart, but don't be fooled - you'll be dowsed in the adrenaline-pumping waters of thriller before long. Flashbacks? Check. Memorable characters? Check. A droplet of violence and drama. Yup. It's got it all.
PROS:
-Acute use of flashbacks.
-Eleven chapters so far, so good chance that this series will keep on going.
-Use of descriptive language.
-Slow but steady character development.
-Realistic dialogue.
-Manageable book cover.
CONS:
-Occasional grammar errors.
-Book summary can use some work on grammar and hook.
-No clear update schedule.
-Need better word choice in some parts. (Ex: Redundancy of word "asked," find better vocab than "super awesome." CH6)
Parental Disclaimer:
-Use of minor profanity (f-bombs and s-bombs, nothing overly vulgar).
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