Story by @annoxy24
REVIEW:
In 2070, everyone's future is controlled and death is already settled by fate. It is a dark dystopia where people's lives are actually not their own. Choices are eradicated. Freedom is neglected. Emotions are concealed. What shall happen?
PROS:
-10 chapters, likely not going to be abandoned.
-"Show not tell" is used accurately and appropriately.
-Good use of italics.
-Appropriate word choice.
CONS:
-No clear update schedule
-Roman numerals hard to read.
Parental Disclaimer:
-Romance mentioned in story.
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