69) Soulless

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Story by @Lighthouse_Highway

REVIEW:

In a world governed by magic, those who aren't magic-wielders are forced into slavery. Yet one of these so-called "slaves" learns to wield the mystic arts - enter Alexander, who cultivates this mysterious force on a plan of justice - to take over and tear apart the magical world so rooted in discrimination. 

PROS:

-Completed.

-Intriguing plot.

-Good use of vocabulary.

-Good commitment of schedule.

CONS:

-Only 4 chapters, can be abandoned.

-A random "part 1" is floating around. 

Parental Disclaimer:

-Magic mentioned in story.

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