Story by @UnicornandWriter
REVIEW:
After 25 years of blissful life as a free man, tragedy strikes. Edward Torres, an good ole' American, is emotionally and physically harmed by his cruel master. But wait! An angel appears! Enter Nafratearie Wright, who tries her best to be kind to poor Torres. But is she kind enough to free him...
PROS:
-Good use of italics.
-Nice job setting up time frame.
-Proper dose of realism.
CONS:
-Fix the minor grammar errors here and there that distract from story.
-No clear update schedule.
Parental Disclaimer:
-Slavery mentioned in story.
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