Story by @Royaltyblack
REVIEW:
A mission of uttermost secrecy is in progress...childhood friend battling childhood friend...oh, the drama! Enter the shadowy world of the Mafia....just what kind of secrets are lurking there, enough so for one to record confidential matter onto a SIM card and implant it onto a human being, praying that the information doesn't see daylight? Join Sophia and Adam, for more, in this thrilling story.
PROS:
-Many comments; implies lots of reader participation.
-10 Chapters, most likely not going to be abandoned.
-Appears to have editors, either hired or on basis of volunteer.
-Descriptive language and an eye out for detail.
-Dialogue to showcase a character's personality, and inner-dialogue to voice a character's true feelings.
CONS:
-No clear update schedule.
-Perhaps each chapter is a tad too long, something I learned to fix when I myself started writing stories on Wattpad.
-A little too much repetition of the work "said" for my liking.
Parental Disclaimer:
-Themes of mafia appear.
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