Story by @Alexdarkunicorn
REVIEW:
Flames, oh flames swept over the land, wailing deep into the night. Flames that traumatized then-16 Tatiana as she ran for her life. Five years later, the nightmare re-kindles. Worst fears become reality, as someone finds out who she is. What can she do to save herself?
PROS:
-Astute word choice.
-"Show, not tell" is used.
-Good chapter length, about 5 minutes per chapter.
-Realistic dialogue.
CONS:
-No clear update schedule.
-7 chapters, chance to be abandoned.
-Chapter titles can be more descriptive.
Parental Disclaimer:
-Violence mentioned in story.
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