33) Hollie

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Story by @SRPhelan

REVIEW:

A truly pitiful girl, Hollie sells herself to make ends meet. How hopeless is she that McDonalds rejected her job application? Don't do it Hollie....don't do it...it's not worth it...

PROS: 

-Descriptive language.

-Evocative craft of words.

-Mature aspect warning labels.

-Short and sweet chapters.

CONS:

-Only two chapters, may be abandoned.

-No clear update schedule.

Parental Disclaimer:

-Very mature aspects in story.

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