Story by @Triple-A7
REVIEW:
100 years, after that fateful nuclear war...Elysium is the only safehaven on this planet, free from the corrupting forces of radiation and famine. Yet that is not the case...that was only a lie to dissuade citizens from exploring the free world in all of its majestic glory....What shall happen? Suspense prevails...
PROS:
-Good use of vocab.
-Proper use of italics.
-Strong sense of suspense.
CONS:
-Chapter titles can be more interesting.
-Only 2 chapters, very likely to be abandoned.
-First book of a series, can be abandoned.
-Chapters a little too long.
Parental Disclaimer:
-Themes of war.
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