Story by @Robyn_Chicken
REVIEW:
On the run from a "crazy ex" that murdered his family! Omega Elric Foster is running for his life, desperately, and just when he thought it couldn't get worst - BAM! His brother drops down a bomb of a secret. Their lives may never be the same after this incident...
PROS:
-Completed.
-Each chapters short and sweet as well as the book itself.
-Astute choices of words.
-Good use of italics to emphasize dialogue.
CONS:
-Chapter titles can be better.
-Brush up on small details such as punctuation and grammar.
Parental Disclaimer:
-Yaoi content in story.
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