43) Crown Of Our Mechty: Path divided(Book one)

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Story by @Purrfectlacy

REVIEW:

Strange powerful visions arise and new powers discovered - though mainstream believes Lace is just a dreamer gal, the opposite will happen. Something suspenseful. Something of a magnitude never seen before. A new path.... no hero has ever walked before.

PROS: 

-51 chapters, the book itself most likely not to be abandoned.

-Good word choice.

-Striking scene descriptions.

-Approvable use of dialogue.

CONS:

-No clear update schedule.

-Chapter names can be more interesting. 

-The first book out of a series, so the series as a whole can possibly be abandoned.

Parental Disclaimer:

-Violent content in story.

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