95) The Progress

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Story by @rykimchi

REVIEW:

Behind an impenetrable cluster of trees lies Camp Progress, designed to raise the next generation of leaders. Yet something is amiss: Stephanie Johnson soon realizes when she finds out she's not supposed to be there. Now, what's next? Will she make it out alive?

PROS:

-Completed

-Won top 3 in three community awards.

-Each chapter around 8 minutes.

-Nicely crafted plot.

-Proper use of italics.

CONS:

-Perhaps allow each dialogue to be it's own paragraph so it stands out more?

Parental Disclaimer:

-Profane language mentioned in story.

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