89) The Eye

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Story by @CursedHobbit

REVIEW:

An 18 year old witch who goes by the name of Minnie ventures on a quest to unearth the secrets of the supernatural universe. Bursting with love and loss, friendship with betrayal, this book will sure capture your eye....not to mention the occasional abominations popping up... 

PROS:

-14 chapters; likely not going to be abandoned.

-Concrete plot.

-Realistic dialogue.

-Proper conventions utilized. 

CONS:

-Book one in a series; can possibly be abandoned.

-Author's notes a bit distracting as inserted between chapters; possibly have them in one chapter at the end, with labels to discern which chapters they are meant for (after the book is finished.) 

Parental Disclaimer:

-Violence and magic mentioned in story.

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