40) Arion

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Story by @Awesome-astronaut

REVIEW:

50 light years away rests the serene planet Demeter, regal and Earth-like. Daniel Walden, aspiring astronaut, is tasked with a mission to meet this planet filled with complex life...yet danger lurks at every corner. There's no gigantic tentacle monster reminiscent of Aliens 👽, but the truth is much worse....

PROS: 

-Winner of the Sparkle Awards 2020: 3rd place: Science Fiction.

-15 chapters, solid chance of not being abandoned.

-Beautiful cover.

-Good use of bold letters to describe where the scene is taking place.

-Original plot that attracts reader.

-Strong word choices. 

CONS:

-No clear update schedule.

-Chapter titles can be more descriptive. 

Parental Disclaimer:

-Violent content in story.

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