23) Vagabonds

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Story by @aawoodsbooks

REVIEW:

Another day, another book folks. And another book, another crisis story. This time we have the honor of following the epic tale of Eliza Mason, once a bored teenager yet now caught in cross-fire of a dangerous mystery. Why did she accept the dare that put herself into this situation? Who knows? Fate seldom reveals its true intentions. Find out more at Vagabonds, coming to the nearest Wattpad app near you.

PROS:

-Use of italics to emphasize personal character though vs narration.

-Keen use of vocabulary to enhance story, ie "snarled" instead of "said" was used in the first half of chapter 1.

-Chapter titles are descriptive and add to the book, yet also clearly labeled "1,2,3...." so easy to denominate which chapter is which as well.

-Dialogue enhances the story.

-Clashes of humor to make the reader laugh at times; other times the mood is suspenseful making the reader's heart race in anticipation.

-34 chapters, most likely going to be completed.

CONS:

-No clear update schedule.

-Plot at times are a tad cliche.

Parental Disclaimer:

-The word "military" and "danger" are used, implying that descriptions of violence are present within the book.

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