Story by @LunaTree
REVIEW:
A pressured marriage and a king missing....what will happen to the queen of dragons, Sunshine, who has laid eggs for her husband, only for him to go missing? Oh, the anguish! The suspense! Let us find out more in LunaTree's story, once rated #1 in deathclaws, Searching for the King.
PROS:
-Completed
-Each chapter short and sweet.
-Clever word choices adds a mystical, "magic" type of zing to the story.
-Lots of realistic dialogue.
CONS:
-Names repeated many times (such as how "Sunshine" was repeated 22 times in Chapter 1, despite each chapter not being that long.)
-A tad cliche and unoriginal.
Parental Disclaimer:
-Themes of pressured marriage.
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