Story by @DreamingBelieving
REVIEW:
A cold-hearted teen with her three lackeys, Analise was messed by none. She striked fear in the hearts of her classmate - but why? How did she turn out this way? Enter the "new guy in town" William Gryer, who takes it upon himself to unravel the complex phycology that has shaped up this ice queen. Read more at Adventuring with Analise.
PROS:
-Completed.
-Each chapter clarifies who the protagonist is to eliminate confusion.
-Astute work of balance in having two narrators without convoluting the story.
-Delicate sense of craft, writing a story that touches a delicate topic without appearing fake, forced, or rude.
-Nice use of vocab.
-Dialogue enhances the text.
CONS:
-The excessive spacing between each paragraph can be an eyesore, although perhaps that is due to Wattpad's formatting and not due to the writer.
Parental Disclaimer:
-Suggestive themes of romance and violence present.
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