83) The Sun in a Jam Jar

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Story by @wiildflowerhoney

REVIEW:

A story of Levi and Ariel, met by fate at the tender age of 8 and broke paths at the defining age of 18. Though perfect setting for a story of heartbreak, intriguingly enough, that's not the point. Instead, we explore Ariel's dream to chase after the sun...

PROS:

-Won first place in prosperity awards.

-Each chapter intriguing and refreshing with clarity.

-Nice vocab.

-Realistic dialogue.

CONS:

-No clear update schedule.

-Chapters not labeled nor titled.

Parental Disclaimer:

-Heartbreak is mentioned in story.

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