Story by @bitterwishes
REVIEW:
Buckle up for a wild clash in this adventure filled novel ....no longer are we dealing with cheap thugs in hoodies but true professionals of the trade! A "ice-king" Mafia heir clashes with "bad-boy play-boy" Mafia heir...and they both pull at Josephine's heartstrings. What will happen?
PROS:
-Good word choice.
-Scene descriptions lures readers.
-Good sized chapters.
-Neat use of dialogue.
CONS:
-Roman numerals definitely add taste to story, but is a little hard to read (or is it just me?)
-Uses "Josephine" too much; used 18 times just in the first chapter.
Parental Disclaimer:
-Mafia descriptions present in story.
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