Story by @RowanLance
REVIEW:
A small band of teens are doing typical teenage stuff....nothing out of the ordinary. Then BAM! The magical world of Zariya appears all of the sudden! Join this wondrous story of heartbreaking betrayal and unexpected friendships, of dainty fairies and fierce dragons. Your imagination is the only limit.
PROS:
-Creative plot.
-Descriptive words that create a fantasy land.
-Clarifies POV.
-Realistic dialogue.
CONS:
-No clear update schedule.
-Titles for chapters can be more intriguing.
-Only 12 chapters; there is a chance for this to be abandoned.
-The trilogy can be abandoned as there is so far only one book.
-If possible, chapters can be shorter. That's what I did - I had 12 long chapters, but thanks to advice from a helpful user, I divided that up to 21 or so chapters.
Parental Disclaimer:
-Violent content in story.
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