Story by @BrutalRice
REVIEW:
7 Souls, 5 Boss, 3 Lords, 2 Legends. Enter the world of Kaizen and Saito who venture into the ancient kingdom of Batilda, only to find chaos everywhere. People missing, vile fugitives on the loose - the end is clearly near. So come on, brave with them on their harrowing journey to find the truth!
PROS:
-13 chapters, likely will not be abandoned.
-Vivid and colorful dialogue.
-Each chapter creates a mood of suspense in line with the plot.
-Proper use of italics.
CONS:
-No clear update schedule.
-The runic symbols surrounding chapter titles are not consistent.
-Chapter titles not creative.
Parental Disclaimer:
-Violence is mentioned in story.
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