Story by @HannWhee
REVIEW:
A city in danger! The best friend of Andrea Alscott has been kidnapped by their vile rivals in the West. War looms as Alscott, an Eastern gang heir, risks everything to recover her friend. A truly stunning flashback to the Golden Age of gangs, when they wore crisp suits and ties 🤵 instead of scummy 10 dollar hoodies and paint-stained jeans. And of course, where there gangs there is crime and violence. Welcome to East Queens😎
PROS:
-Good development of plot and character.
-Plot twists that could make a gang member shrill in excitement.
-Appears to be hiring an editor.
-Use of descriptive language.
-Awesome use of character names at top, to signify who's POV the reader is experiencing.
-Nice formatting of paragraphs.
-Realistic dialogue.
-Eye-striking cover.
-Appears to have won numerous awards.
-25 Chapters, most likely not to be abandoned.
CONS:
-Occasional grammar errors.
-Is this in line with copyright law - the gifs on the first chapter? Worried that DMCA might go overboard and claim that is violation of law.
-No clear update schedule.
Parental Disclaimer:
-Moderate violence.
-Gang themes.
-Mature topics.
-Profanity
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