66) The Way of the Wind

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Story by @Bezaunungieye

REVIEW:

Escape from a forced marriage! Can Alysia be re-united with the people she holds dears, and escape from the harrowing cluches of King Tus III - a ruleless maniac who invades other kingdoms just to find a bride for his heir. What will happen in this epic war of kingdoms? 

PROS:

-Won several 1st place awards in local Wattpad community contests.

-Book is completed.

-Each chapter good length of around 6 minutes.

-Descriptive details.

-"Show not tell" is used accurately and appropriately. 

CONS:

-No clear update schedule

-Some randomly titled chapters such as "Dedication" and "Part Two"

-For some reason chapters 35 and 36 are merged.

Parental Disclaimer:

-Romance mentioned in story.

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