Story by @caylebs
REVIEW:
Texas. The lone star state. The home of the........alien princesses? Join Ordinary Kara and Princess Raina as they are unexpectedly forced to bond after the royal Spaceship crashes. When adventure and Sci-Fi clash, with a hint of fantasy, you know the end product is going to be great! But wait, there's more! There's also a sequel - check it out if you enjoyed this book😊
PROS:
-Dialogue greatly amplifies the scene.
-Professional book cover.
-Great "mini-prologue" intros for each chapter.
-Established plot + characters.
-Dramatic twists and turns - a roller coaster of a story.
-Appears to have a wealth of reader feedback and comments.
-Appears to have an editor either hired or on basis of volunteer.
-Completed! Good job!
-Very climatic end, yet not the absolute resolution a reader would be looking for. Which is great in this case....as there is a sequel😎
CONS:
-Book summary is very descriptive and intriguing, but a tad too long.
-Could work on word choice a little:
"Oh, nana," I utter. (Prologue) "Utter" seemed a bit misplaced, and perhaps a better word would have been better?
Parental Disclaimer:
-Very, very minor violence.
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