46) The Crazy Side of Love

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Story by @makayla_ED

REVIEW:

A ganglord and a serial killer meet! Circumstances force them to collaborate as they evade both police and bounty hunters...while an uncanny romance is sparked! What will happen next? Stay tuned for, The Crazy Side of Love.

PROS: 

-Good chapter length.

-Keen descriptive language.

-Dialogue is few in numbers, but each adds to the story.

CONS:

-No clear update schedule.

-Fix grammar.

-Only 12 chapters; there is a chance for this to be abandoned.

-Weird OBJ sticker exists in chapter titles - it that intentional or a browser glitch?

-Formatting of story bothers me.

Parental Disclaimer:

-LGBTQ content in story.

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