36) The Easy Route

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Story by @toriwritess

REVIEW:

Love blossoms from two innocent young woman running for their lives....out of a cruel kidnap blossoms a new hope for a better future. Can these two overcome their fears as landmine secrets threaten to tear them apart? Read more at The Easy Route.  

PROS:

-Clever word choice.

-Descriptions lure the reader.

-"Show, not tell" used.

CONS:

-Only eight chapters, may be abandoned.

-No clear update schedule. 

-The prologue should go after the cast page.

Parental Disclaimer:

-LGBTQ content in story.

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