12) Witch Story

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Story by @dangergoose333

REVIEW:

A prodigy is born!😊 Yay! Except.....maybe not.....for the prodigy is versed in the dark arts...😳. Join us on a wicked witch adventure filled with danger, violence, and of course, magic. Be careful of the risks, you may be cursed for eternity....

PROS:

-A steady pace of plot development.

-Nice descriptive language.

-Nice formatting of paragraphs.

-A focus in detail.

-Realistic dialogue.

-9 Chapters, probably not going to be abandoned.

CONS:

-Excessive swearing may be a little over-the-top and unrealistic.

-No clear update schedule.

Parental Disclaimer:

-Witches are present.

-Foul language.

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