Story by @caylebs
REVIEW:
Jackson is like a cunning tactical droid - analytical, precise, and calculated; he plans to go to Harvard for a law degree and make big bucks in the world🤑 Sounds like a typical boring story of a workaholic with no life.....until Elena Knight appears. Love blossoms❤️ slowly but surely, clogging and rusting the wheels within Jackson's head....so much that he isn't sure of what to do with life anymore. Shall he pursue romance? Shall he abandon personal feelings in favor of dedication to work? What will happen?
PROS:
-Good vocabulary used.
-Italics used to reiterate inner thoughts.
-Chapters are not too long yet not too short.
-Frequent and astute use of dialogue.
-Though only 7 chapters, this is written by a reputable author who will most likely not abandon the story.
-Humor enhances story.
CONS:
-Make an update schedule?
-Fix small grammar and capitalization mistakes.
Parental Disclaimer:
-Romance is a central part of the story.
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