Story by @armeiallanes
REVIEW:
Love, strife, and a loss of identity! Join seventeen-year-old Araulla Jones as she fearfully runs away in hopes to live a life under the sun, and away from the shadow of her brother. An epic and tear-jerking tale awaits all who reads..
PROS:
-A steady pace of plot development.
-Good use of technique "show, not tell."
-Use of descriptive language.
-Nice formatting of paragraphs.
-Realistic dialogue.
-18 Chapters, most likely not to be abandoned.
CONS:
-Occasional grammar errors.
-Book intro too long.
-Cover could be better.
-No clear update schedule.
Parental Disclaimer:
-Cursing.
-Violence.
-Drugs and alcohol.
-Sexual content.
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