26) The Emerald King

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Story by @ikesmith7

REVIEW:

A tragedy occurs! Two lovers separated when a cruel and sinister attack on their beloved village is orchestrated by The Emerald King. New friendships and alliances are forged in the battlefields - comrades who bear arms together to fight evil create bonds that will last lifetimes. When the curtain falls and this epic tale comes to a close, what will be the outcome for these two lovebirds.....

PROS:

-Painstakingly careful world-building and character-crafting.

-Each chapter title unique.

-Concise book summary.

-Attention to detail; show-not-tell utilized. 

-Use of italics to convey inner emotion.

-On-spot employment of dialogue.

-Completed.

CONS:

-Would be helpful if chapters were additionally named "1,2,3..."

Parental Disclaimer:

-Descriptions of violence present.

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