50) A Time and Place

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Story by @GraceBailey3103

REVIEW:

There are said to be two things that cannot be avoided - death and taxes. Yet what if you could help someone else cheat death (nevermind the taxes; the IRS is indomitable). What if you wielded the power the change the death date of someone else, be it a stranger or a loved one? What would you do, and what would the consequences be?

PROS: 

-Completed

-Short and sweet.

-Plot compels reader to move on and on with the story.

-Creative word choice.

CONS:

-Chapter titles can be more interesting.

Parental Disclaimer:

-Topics of death in story.

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