Story by @ASilentVoice17
REVIEW:
An outbreak of war! The delicate balance between six great nations is shattered, as one rouge country plunges the entire continent into blazing war. Fierce fighting devastate all and everything - the magnitude of bloodshed not seen since the great demon wares centuries prior. A drug-addicted alcoholic named Zein might ironically be the key to salvation...what will happen next?
PROS:
-Intriguing storyline.
-Descriptions of scenes draw in the reader.
-Each chapter short and sweet, but packs a punch and leaves an impression.
CONS:
-No posting schedule apparent.
-Only 4 chapters, can be abandoned.
-Each "page" seems too long to be a "page," although not a problem if titled "chapter" instead.
-Find creative ways to call the protagonist - there were 30 cases of "Zein" in page 1, and 19 cases of "Zein" in page 2.
Parental Disclaimer:
-Descriptions of drugs and alcohol present.
YOU ARE READING
Book Reviews
RandomAspiring to become a renowned writer? But struggling due to low reader turnout? Then come kick off your journey on Wattpad by submitting your piece here! CURRENTLY OPEN
