Story by @BenFuHolo
REVIEW:
A fledgeling apocalyptic story of danger and lovebirds. Yes. The old typical "love and violence"😎😎😎. Though much too incomplete and primal on its own, one can only pray to the writing gods that the author will continue writing. Then, the gates will burst - and with it, a harrowing tale of the final days of humanity..........
PROS:
-Good progression of character development and plot; suggests further development as story progresses.
-Use of descriptive language.
-Realistic dialogue.
-Sets the stage for an expansive apocalyptic world and future chapters.
CONS:
-Occasional grammar errors.
-It is listed as "completed" even though it does not appear "completed."
-Cover can be better.
-Book summary can be more concise.
-Huge, blocky paragraphs can be hard to read.
Parental Disclaimer:
-Minor violence.
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