85) Past the Garden Wall

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Story by @Ctrain8

REVIEW:

The Banshee. A terrible, remorseless monster roams around the isolated pioneer town of LockHaven, as endless Autumn prevents the seasons from changing...why cannot this monster breach the town, except for that one Flaming Night 20 years ago? Will it be finally be killed by the victims it created?

PROS:

-12 chapters; likely not going to be abandoned.

-Intriguing chapter titles.

-Astute word choice.

-Packs a thrilling punch.

-Rotating POV artfully used.

CONS:

-No clear update schedule.

-Roman numerals a tad hard to read.

Parental Disclaimer:

-Violence is mentioned in story.

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