The queen of Samrat

Ch 53 Why god why?

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ARYAVIR POV

15 days had passed but Kriti was not regaining consciousness.

Every day her life was in danger, I was feeling a strange fear of losing her.

I don't know when Kriti will regain consciousness, when she will get up and take my name, when she will give me that sweet smile.

Sitting beside her and holding her hand I was only asking God to save her or take my life.

It seemed like today my love would die in front of my eyes and I would be able to save her.

At last there was one hope left in me which now seemed to be breaking down.

I have never loved anyone so much, you were my first and last love.

But if you leave me like this then how will I live alone?

I know it was my mistake, but why did you give me such a severe punishment for it?

I want forgiveness from you, please forgive me and come back.

Even if you want to stay away from me, I don't have any problem with that, but don't leave me alone like this.

Then Rupa came, took a bowl in her hand and said -" Greeting king, This is a medicine, the doctor has told me to give it to her"

You give this to me and go from here and call the doctor quickly.

Jii -" she said and leaved"

I slowly gave the medicine to Kriti, now I just wish that you get up soon.

I grabbed her hand and put it to my chest and said in slow voice -" Kriti can't you feel my heartbeat? Its becoming fast"

Can't you feel my pain? Can't you feel my agony ? Can't you feel how I'm feeling right now?

I feel like this will all be over in a few moments, please Kriti, get up and hug me once.

After this I will do whatever you say, if you tell me to stay away then I will stay away but please get up once.

I feel a strange sense of disbelief seeing you in this condition, It feels like I'm all alone.

What will I do to become the king of this kingdom when you will not be with me?

I only want you Kriti, I just want to hear a beautiful voice, I just want to see beautiful eyes.

You get up once, after that hit me or tell me whatever you want to do, I will do everything you even if I need to cross my limits.

How much more will you torment me now? I can't bear it anymore Kriti.

I can bear your anger but I can't live without you.

That's where the vaidya comes and started checking her pulse and fever.

I was seeing a strange fear on the vaidya face and along with it I was realizing that Kriti's condition is getting serious.

Still I controlled fear and asked him -" What happened"?

He gulped down and said -" I don't think she will be able to survive now"

After hearing this I felt as if someone had taken away my whole world from me.

I grabbed his collar and said -" Agar kriti ko kuch bhi hua na to soch lena tumhare sath kya hoga"