Being edited!!!!

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I know, I know, 'OMG she finally got around to it.'

Currently editing this mess because it can be improved and I need something to spend time on while procrastinating.

I've already rewritten most of it so here's what's changed:

- The story is more depressing and darker and in some parts wildly different.

- Dragged out Newt and Y/n's relationship to make it more satisfying

- Added a whole section between The Aftermath and The Death Cure

- Tried to more accurately portray mental illness but obviously it's dramatised. I would like to state that having a mental illness does not mean someone is violent.

- Going to add warnings for the suicidal parts so people can easily skip and will add a basic summary at the beginning of the next chapter. Will probably look like:

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*words*

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- Attempted to improve my grammar/ the structure of the writing itself so it isn't all a massive block that is so hard to read.

What I have edited (will be updated as I go). Some parts won't entirely make sense until it's all changed.

-all of the Scorch Trials

- all of part 3 (The Right Arm)

-all of part 4 (The Aftermath)

Bear with me, this may take some time. 

Love you all, xx.

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