Hateful Love(Sans X Chara)

Chapter 78 True Monster (Revision)

Third Person

Frisk covered her ears and ran, the sound seemed to follow her but eventually died down as she got further away, a glow caught her eye and she walked towards it, a glowing object she'd not seen for a long time was now in front of her, a glowing star, from her first time entering the underground, she remembered all of her deaths, all the resets, all the continues, she thought she would never see a save star ever again, but here was one in front of her, it was a symbol of warmth and courage for her.

Frisk

I sighed, relieved to have some source of comfort, I sat by the star for some time, I looked around, I didn't know where I was but I felt completely at peace, I looked forward, there wasn't anything that I could see that looked familiar, I sighed and stood up from the star, not wanting to leave the comfort and courage it was giving me, but I had to find Chara! I walked through the dark tunnel for awhile till I came across a door, what's a door doing here, I wondered, it was old, really old, dust seemed to just fly off of it, I opened it and looked around, black water was everywhere, I saw a bridge, it was the bridge to hotlands! I made it! Hotlands here I...

Third Person

Frisk stopped almost immediately at the middle of the bridge, a yellow monster with bright yellow scales that had been covered in mud and something else with no arms, and a torn up ragged brown striped shirt stood before her, "Monster.. Kid?" Frisk said in a whisper, it wasn't the monster kid she remembered, this monster in front of her was like something from a freakish nightmare,  but this was real, it was no dream, the monster looked at her after hearing her and smiled, rows of sharp teeth lined it's mouth, Frisk shuddered at the sight, a red goo was dripping from it's mouth, she didn't want to think or even know what it was, but the smell coming from it's breath was the worst part, she backed up, it stayed completely still, then as if it had lost interest it dove into the black water below, it was so dark and murky that Frisk couldn't see into it at all.

Frisk

I stared at the water for awhile looking at my reflection, it was grey, my striped sweater was there, but there was something off about it, I looked at it closer and closer, there was a locket around my reflections neck, it was colored gold, I don't have a locket, nor have I ever, I felt for it on my neck, it wasn't there, I looked back to the reflection, dark amber eyes like an abyss stared back at me, I couldn't look away, the water seemed to be getting closer to me, I tried to back away but I couldn't move, or even breathe, then the reflection laughed, but I wasn't laughing, then I felt a tug, I was being pulled into the water, by the reflection.

I am much more satisfied with this revision, I hope yall enjoy it as much I enjoyed writing it, thanks as always for reading vote and comment, and please share with friends you think will also enjoy! -Tenjo

A/N thanks to fnaflovergirl for their insight and encouragement to revise this chapter!